[User]
HOla Claude, I have the following final draft of my current short form resume.

Could you review it and take into consideration the current world of ATS systems and help me ensure this resume can maneuver its way through.

I've had 5 interviews in 3 years, 2000 applications.

Its obvious somethings not working right.

Let me know if you have any questions before you begin.
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[Assistant]
Good timing on this ask — I just pulled fresh intel on how ATS systems behave in 2026 so this is current. Let me give you the full picture.

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## Resume Audit: Bert Mahoney — ATS Analysis

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### 🔴 What's Probably Killing Your Applications

- **Your resume reads like a brand document, not a machine-parseable resume.** Section headers like "WHO I AM," "HOW I WORK," and "SELECTED IMPACT" are invisible to ATS. The bots are looking for "Work Experience," "Skills," "Education" — literally those words.
- **No standard job titles in prominent places.** "Senior Digital Experience Designer" and "AI Product Designer/Builder" are human-resonant but keyword-weak. ATS matches against role titles like *UX Designer, Product Designer, Senior UX/UI Designer* — exact strings from job postings.
- **Zero quantified metrics woven into bullets.** Metrics like "Built sales dashboard... improving reporting efficiency by 20%" lift ATS scores significantly over vague statements. Your bullets are narrative-heavy and metric-light, which loses points in scoring algorithms.
- **Your Skills section is buried inside prose.** ATS needs a dedicated, scannable Skills section to find competencies fast. Yours are embedded in "CORE CAPABILITIES" with subgroups — parsers may skip right past it.
- **Location is working against you.** If you're applying for roles in Colorado but your resume says New York, you may get filtered out before anyone reads your name. With your move two months out, this needs an immediate fix.
- **The "WHO I AM / HOW I WORK" structure is editorial, not ATS-compatible.** These are great for humans who land on your LinkedIn or personal site — but ATS doesn't care about your philosophy, it cares about keywords.
- **No Professional Summary section** with keywords front-loaded.

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### 🟡 What's Working (Keep It)

- Strong career narrative and voice — once it gets past the bot, a human will love it
- Concrete impact statements exist (19 → 6 steps, 20% conversion lift) — they just need formatting
- Breadth of experience is genuinely impressive — needs to be extracted into scannable form
- The tech stack list is good — just needs better placement and formatting

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### 🟢 The Fix: What the Revised Structure Should Look Like

| Current Section | Replace With |
|---|---|
| WHO I AM | **Professional Summary** (3–4 lines, keyword-rich) |
| HOW I WORK | *(fold key phrases into Summary and bullets)* |
| CORE CAPABILITIES | **Skills** (flat list or two-column list, ATS-readable) |
| SELECTED IMPACT | *(fold into Work Experience as bullet achievements)* |
| PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE | **Work Experience** (standard header) |
| EDUCATION | **Education** (standard header) |
| DESIGN STACK | *(fold into Skills section)* |
| RECOGNITION | **Awards & Recognition** |

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### 🔧 Immediate Action Items

1. **Rename all sections** to ATS-standard headers
2. **Add a Professional Summary** at the top — 3 sentences, loaded with keywords from the roles you want
3. **Create a flat Skills section** — single column or clean two-column, no subcategory headers
4. **Fix your location** — list "Denver, CO" or "Relocating to Denver, CO — [Month] 2026"
5. **Add metrics to every bullet** you can — percentages, dollar values, time saved, team sizes
6. **Use exact job title language** from postings you're targeting — mirror their words
7. **Save as .docx**, not PDF, unless the posting specifically requests PDF
8. **Run it through Jobscan** — paste your resume against a real job description and aim for 75%+ match rate before submitting anything

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### TL;DR

**Your resume is written for humans and completely mis-formatted for robots.** In a world where 75% of resumes are rejected before a human ever reads them, you're losing the game before it starts — not because your work isn't impressive, but because your headers are wrong, your skills section is buried, your location is mismatched, and your bullets lack the metrics ATS scoring systems reward. The bones are solid. The document needs a structural overhaul, not a rewrite.

---

Want me to go ahead and rewrite this into a fully ATS-optimized version? I can produce a clean `.docx` that passes the bots *and* still sounds like you — not a robot who read a LinkedIn course.

[User]
ok, and here is a list of keywords to include for a role I'm applying for.

Note: I am changing my angle for my value add to companies with my current AI experience building my own, no cost, purely private, AI agents with Agent0, LiteLLM, Ollama, and EC2.

So dialing down the the UX, raising up the AI and Systems Design.

Let me know if you have any questions before you start.

* product design leadership
* Head of Design
* 0→1 product development
* startup lifecycle
* design systems
* scalable design systems
* ambiguity
* prototyping
* high-fidelity prototypes
* cross-functional leadership
* founders / leadership partnership
* product strategy
* storytelling
* brand systems
* responsive / mobile-first design
* Figma (component libraries, auto-layout, variants)
* front-end (HTML, CSS, JavaScript)
* AI / AI-powered tools
* design frameworks / patterns
* north star vision

[Assistant]
Good, got the skill. Now let me build this.\n\nHere's your ATS-optimized resume, rebuilt from the ground up. Here's what changed and why:

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### What's Different

**Structure** — All section headers are now ATS-standard: *Professional Summary, Skills, Work Experience, Education, Awards & Recognition.* The bots will find every section.

**Title line** — "AI Product Designer & Systems Thinker | Head of Design | 0→1 Builder" — leads with your new angle, front-loaded with keywords before anyone reads a single bullet.

**Location** — "Denver, CO (Relocating June 2026) | New York, NY (Current)" — covers both bases and won't get you filtered out of Colorado roles.

**Professional Summary** — 4-sentence keyword-dense paragraph that hits: 0→1, AI agent stacks, product design leadership, ambiguity, north star vision, founders/leadership partnership. ATS reads this first and scores it heavily.

**Skills section** — Flat, categorized, fully scannable. Every keyword from your list is in there, plus your AI stack, Figma specifics, and front-end skills. ATS loves a clean skills table.

**Work Experience bullets** — Rewritten to weave keywords *into* achievement statements rather than just listing duties. Metrics preserved where you had them (19→6 steps, 20% conversion, $2M platform). Your AI work is now **first** and given the most real estate.

---

### Next Step — Do This Before Every Application

Run it through **[Jobscan.co](https://www.jobscan.co)** — paste your resume + the job description and aim for 75%+ match. Takes 2 minutes and tells you exactly which keywords to swap in for that specific role. Think of this resume as your **master template** — Jobscan tells you the 3–4 tweaks per application.

[User] putting this into google docs. what hierarchy of "headings" should I use to ensure ATS plays nice with my resume and heiracrhy is preserved

[Assistant]
Great practical question. Here's the short answer:

**Don't use Google Docs Heading styles for a resume you're submitting through ATS.**

Here's why — and what to do instead.

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### The Problem with Heading Styles in Google Docs → ATS

When you export a Google Doc to `.docx`, Heading 1 / Heading 2 etc. can confuse parsers. ATS systems like Workday and Taleo expect resume section labels to read as **bold plain text**, not document headings. Heading tags are for web pages and long-form docs — ATS wasn't built around them. Some parsers will misread a Heading 2 as a section title *and* skip the content beneath it, or lump everything into one field.

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### What to Actually Use

| Element | Google Docs Style | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Your name | **Normal text**, large font, bold | Not Heading 1 — parsers can misread it |
| Section labels (SKILLS, WORK EXPERIENCE, etc.) | **Normal text**, bold, ALL CAPS | This is the sweet spot for ATS |
| Job title | **Normal text**, bold | |
| Company / dates | Normal text | Plain, no styling tricks |
| Bullets | Use Google Docs built-in bullet list | Not dashes or manual characters |
| Everything else | Normal text | |

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### The One Exception

If you're submitting **directly to a human** (email to a recruiter, direct LinkedIn message, your portfolio) — headings are fine and actually help scannability. Keep a separate "human" version if you want.

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### TL;DR

**Normal text + bold + ALL CAPS for section headers.** That's your hierarchy. No Heading styles at all in the ATS version. The formatting signal ATS needs is the *label text itself* ("WORK EXPERIENCE"), not the HTML/XML tag wrapped around it.

The `.docx` I built for you already follows this — if you're rebuilding it in Google Docs, just mirror that approach and you're good.

[User] ok, so if I import this into google docs and export as PDF will it be ok for ATS?

[Assistant]
Short answer: **it depends on the ATS — and the odds aren't great.**

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### The PDF Problem

Modern enterprise ATS systems like Workday and Taleo handle well-formatted PDFs at 90%+ parsing accuracy — *if* the PDF is text-based and clean. Yours would be.

**But** — unless the job posting explicitly asks for a PDF, send `.docx`. That's the safest default, full stop.

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### The Google Docs Import → Export Risk

Here's the specific danger in your workflow:

- Google Docs **will reflow and reformat** your `.docx` on import — fonts shift, spacing changes, the skills table may collapse or break
- When you export *that* back out as PDF, you're exporting Google's interpreted version, not the clean original
- Any table that breaks during import becomes an **ATS parsing nightmare** in the PDF export — tables are one of the top things that cause ATS parsers to fail or skip content entirely

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### The Recommended Workflow

| Submission Type | Format | Source |
|---|---|---|
| ATS / job board | `.docx` | The file I built — submitted directly |
| Direct to human | `.pdf` | Export from the original `.docx`, not via Google Docs |
| Google Docs editing | Use it to edit, but **re-export `.docx`** | Don't use Google's PDF export for ATS submissions |

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### TL;DR

Don't route your resume through Google Docs just to get a PDF. If you want a clean PDF, export it directly from Word or use Google Docs only for editing — then download as `.docx` for ATS submissions. The `.docx` I made you is your ATS weapon. Use it as-is.

[User]
ok, Got it thanks.

could you now provide a description for my bertmahoney.com resume page?

AI Product Designer and Builder is the one I'm referring to. I dont have this on my website and want to add it today.

[Assistant] Before I write it, two quick questions:\n\nWaiting on your picks and I'll write it straight away.

[User]
Q: What tone are you going for on the site?
A: Hybrid — credible but human

Q: How long should the description be?
A: Medium — a solid paragraph

[Assistant]
Here you go:

---

**AI Product Designer & Builder** — Independent / OpenClaw, 2025–Present

Most people who talk about AI are using it. I'm building it — from scratch, from the ground up, with no vendor lock-in and no monthly bill. As an independent AI product designer and builder, I design and deploy private AI agent stacks using Agent Zero, LiteLLM, Ollama, and AWS EC2 — fully local, fully owned, and built around real workflow problems. The work starts where it always has for me: UX discovery, systems thinking, and a stubborn belief that complexity should resolve into clarity. What's different now is the medium. I'm designing human-AI interaction models — persistent memory, personality consistency, contextual recall — and building the infrastructure underneath them. This isn't a pivot. It's 30 years of design and systems thinking finding its next frontier.

---

Want me to also write a punchy one-liner version for the page header or meta description — the SEO-facing bit that shows up in Google search results?

[User]
Yes. And I'd like to take this one step farther. Lets update LinkedIN. Time to retire the designer only label.

https://linkedin.com/in/bertmahoney

I need a new Title for my header. Need to PUSH AI forward with my new experience.

[Assistant]
LinkedIn blocks scraping, so I'm working from what I know about you. No problem — I have everything I need.

---

### One-liner for bertmahoney.com (meta/SEO)

> Senior AI product designer and builder with 30 years of experience — designing human-AI systems, deploying private agent stacks, and translating complexity into clarity.

---

### LinkedIn Header Title Options

These are written to push AI forward while keeping your design credibility intact — because that combination is genuinely rare and worth owning.

---

**Option 1 — Bold and direct**
> AI Product Designer & Builder | Designing + Deploying Private AI Agent Systems | 30 Years of UX & Systems Thinking

**Option 2 — Lead with the rarity**
> I Design AI Systems and Build Them Too | AI Product Designer | Agent Zero · LiteLLM · Ollama · AWS

**Option 3 — Role-title forward (best for ATS/recruiter search)**
> Head of Design & AI Product Builder | 0→1 Products | Private AI Agent Architecture | Human-AI Interaction Design

**Option 4 — Voice-forward, most "you"**
> Designer. Builder. AI Architect. I make complex systems make sense — and now I build the AI underneath them.

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### My Pick

**Option 3** if you're actively job hunting — it's keyword-rich and recruiter-searchable. **Option 4** if the site and Substack audience are the primary goal right now — it sounds most like *Barely But Here* Bert, not resume Bert.

Want me to also rewrite the LinkedIn About section to match the new positioning?

[User]
Want me to also rewrite the LinkedIn About section to match the new positioning?

Yes please. Keyword rich.

I'm going to be launching my AI Consulting offer for small businesses. Have a landing page, and signup. Already in the works.

So the aim right now is two-fold.

AI credibility because I DO hand build these things. Currently going deep on Skills.md files and how best to define workflows.

And keyword rich for companies and recruiters to find me.

Let me know if you have any questions before starting and THANKS!!

[Assistant]
No questions — I've got everything I need. Writing it now.

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### LinkedIn About Section

I build AI systems. Not prompt wrappers. Not ChatGPT plugins. Actual private, no-cost AI agent architectures — deployed on AWS EC2, running Agent Zero, LiteLLM, and Ollama — fully local, fully owned, zero vendor dependency.

That's the new frontier. But it's built on 30 years of the same core skill: taking complex, ambiguous systems and making them work for the people inside them.

I'm a senior AI product designer and builder with experience across 8 design disciplines and 30+ industries — from healthcare and finance to automotive and early learning. I've led 0→1 product development, built scalable design systems, modernized legacy platforms, and partnered with founders and leadership to turn chaos into north star vision. Now I'm doing all of that with AI as the medium.

**What I'm building right now:**

I'm currently developing an AI consulting practice for small businesses — helping owners implement private, practical AI workflows that don't require a technical team, a big budget, or handing their data to a third party. Local-first. Human-centered. Actually useful.

On the technical side, I go deep. I design and build custom AI agent stacks from scratch. I architect human-AI interaction models with persistent memory, personality consistency, and contextual recall. I'm currently working inside Skills.md workflow design and agent behavior frameworks — the unglamorous, high-leverage work that makes AI systems actually perform.

**What I bring that's hard to find:**

Most AI builders can't design. Most designers can't build. I do both — and I've been translating complexity into clarity for three decades. I know what a broken workflow looks like from the inside. I know how to fix it. And I know how to design the human experience around whatever system sits underneath.

**Core capabilities:**

AI product design · AI agent architecture · Agent Zero · LiteLLM · Ollama · AWS EC2 · private local AI · human-AI interaction design · 0→1 product development · product design leadership · Head of Design · scalable design systems · design systems · brand systems · cross-functional leadership · founders & leadership partnership · product strategy · prototyping · high-fidelity prototypes · Figma · front-end development (HTML · CSS · JavaScript) · responsive / mobile-first design · north star vision · storytelling · startup lifecycle · ambiguity

---

📍 Relocating to Denver, CO — June 2026
🌐 bertmahoney.com
✉ hello@bertmahoney.com

---

### Notes on the Structure

- **Opens with a bold differentiator** — not "I'm a designer with 30 years" but "I build actual AI systems" — stops the scroll
- **Consulting offer is seeded** naturally without being a hard pitch — lets recruiters and small business owners both self-select
- **Skills.md / workflow design** is mentioned to signal depth without over-explaining
- **Core capabilities block** at the bottom is pure keyword fuel — LinkedIn's search algorithm indexes that section heavily
- **Relocating note** handles the location question proactively for both Denver and remote opportunities

Be well. Good luck with the launch. 🤙

[User]
can we turn our editing revisioning refactorin gaze at bertmahoney.com homepage??

We need the AI treatment to this page.

FIrst I suggest this block design>

Hero,
First Section,
Second Section,
Third Section,
Final Section,
Footer

And since we're redesigning this and rewording it, we can reauthor and rearrange all the sections here.

Out put should be

Names of sections listed (first)

Send first draft to me. We work to finalize the order.

Then you provide first draft for each section based on my resume and the switch to AI.
Leverage my human skills, I can talk to anyone. INFP, Metacognitive and Trauma IQs

Let me know if you have any questions before starting.

[Assistant] A few quick ones before I put pen to paper:\n\nAnswers in and I'll get the section names to you right away.

[User]
Q: Who's the PRIMARY audience you want the homepage to speak to first?
A: Both equally

Q: What's the ONE thing you want a visitor to do when they land on the page?
A: Contact you / hire you

Q: How much does Barely But Here / your writing identity show up on this page?
A: Not at all — separate world

[Assistant]
Perfect. Clean and focused. Here are the section names — first draft for your review before I write a single word of copy.

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### Proposed Homepage Structure

**1. Hero**
*Who you are + what you do + the one thing they should do next*

**2. The Problem I Solve**
*The "why you need someone like me" section — speaks to both audiences without splitting the page*

**3. What I Do**
*Two clear lanes: AI design & build / Senior product design leadership — no ambiguity about your range*

**4. How I Work**
*The human skills section — INFP, metacognitive, translator, the person who can sit in any room — this is your differentiator from every other AI builder and designer out there*

**5. Selected Work**
*3–4 proof points pulled from your strongest impact stories — numbers, outcomes, credibility*

**6. Footer**
*Contact CTA, links, location, keep it clean*

---

### One Flag Before You Approve

"How I Work" is where your real unfair advantage lives — the human stuff. Most AI builders are introverts who hate meetings. You're the person who can talk to a founder, a grieving employee, a confused engineer, and a skeptical CFO in the same afternoon and land with all four. That's worth a full section, not a bullet point.

---

Does this order land? Any sections you want renamed, reordered, or cut before I write the drafts?

[User]
#4 remember how many years, types of roles, technologies, and places I've worked.
I have a DIVERSE technical communications background for someone born at my time.
Most dont stay in the game this long.
However, time to earn some new "Life Merit Badges" which are something I'd like to both blog about and actually talk about a product for people to buy and frame on the wall to recognize big life events. For example, Parent Merit Badge,  Marriage Merit Badge,  Home Owner Merit Badge, Mid-Life ReBoot Merit Badge, Divorce Merit Badge, etc. You get the idea. We could even do a range of emotions ones for BBH.

ok. I'm ready for draft with th at info I just gave you

[Assistant]
Love the Life Merit Badges concept — that's a product AND a content universe. We'll park that and come back to it, it deserves its own session.

For now — section names are approved, drafts incoming.

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## bertmahoney.com — Homepage First Draft

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### 1. HERO

**I design systems. I build AI. I speak human.**

Thirty years. Eight disciplines. Thirty industries. One through-line: I take the thing that isn't working — the product, the process, the team, the technology — and I make it make sense.

I'm a senior AI product designer and builder available for product leadership roles and AI consulting engagements.

**→ Let's talk** *(CTA button)*

---

### 2. THE PROBLEM I SOLVE

Most organizations have one of two problems.

The first: they have smart people, real vision, and a system — technical, organizational, or human — that refuses to cooperate. The second: they're staring at AI like it's a loaded weapon with no safety and no manual.

Both problems have the same solution. Someone who can walk into ambiguity without flinching, figure out what's actually broken, and build toward something better. Someone who understands the technology *and* the people living inside it.

That's the work I do.

---

### 3. WHAT I DO

**AI Design & Build**
I design and deploy private, no-cost AI agent systems from scratch — Agent Zero, LiteLLM, Ollama, AWS EC2. No vendor lock-in. No data exposure. No six-figure implementation bill. Just working AI, built around your actual workflows, owned entirely by you. I also consult with small businesses ready to implement AI without handing their operations to a third party.

**Senior Product Design Leadership**
I've shipped over 1,000 digital products across healthcare, finance, automotive, insurance, early learning, and 25 other industries. I've led 0→1 builds, modernized 30-year-old legacy platforms, reduced 19-step onboarding flows to 6, and increased conversion by 20% through design alone. I work as Head of Design, solo designer, or anywhere in between — depending on what the team actually needs.

---

### 4. HOW I WORK

I was writing HTML before most current developers were in grade school. I've navigated desktop to web, web to mobile, mobile to responsive, responsive to AI — every major platform shift of the last three decades. I didn't just survive each one. I led through them.

But the technology has never been the point.

I'm an INFP with a metacognitive bent and a hard-won fluency in human complexity — what researchers call trauma intelligence. I've sat with founders at 11pm before a board meeting. I've translated a developer's frustration into a stakeholder's aha moment. I've walked into organizations mid-crisis and left them with a roadmap, a system, and a team that finally understood each other.

I can work with anyone. I can make anyone feel heard. And I can do it while shipping.

That combination — deep technical range, genuine human literacy, and thirty years of staying in the game — is not common. Most people pick a lane. I've earned the full road.

---

### 5. SELECTED WORK

**$2M Auction Platform Modernization** — Art+Logic
Redesigned a 30-year-old wholesale vehicle auction system running weekly multi-million dollar auctions. Mapped undocumented workflows, aligned siloed teams, delivered a complete 0→1 redesign over two years.

**19 Steps → 6** — Hatch Early Learning
Research-led onboarding redesign that increased engagement, improved adoption, and cut support load. Built the design system and personas from scratch.

**Crisis Design Leadership** — STAAR Surgical
Brought in after a stalled engagement. Delivered discovery and prototypes that convinced the C-suite to move forward and secured a full development contract.

**Private AI Agent Architecture** — OpenClaw (Independent)
Designed and deployed a fully local AI agent stack using Agent Zero, LiteLLM, Ollama, and AWS EC2. Currently developing Skills.md workflow frameworks and human-AI interaction models for small business implementation.

---

### 6. FOOTER

**Bert Mahoney**
AI Product Designer & Builder · Senior Design Leader
Denver, CO (Relocating June 2026)

hello@bertmahoney.com
bertmahoney.com
LinkedIn · Substack

*Available for product leadership roles and AI consulting engagements.*

---

How's the bones? Call out anything that's off-tone, over-claimed, or missing — and we'll refine section by section.

[User]
this is great. let me do a few touches here and there. One quick question. I'm thinking bullets for the lists.

People dont read websites they scan them.

IMO items in those lists have better chance of being scanned and seen, and revisited for clarity than read in the first place.

[Assistant]
You're right. Scanning is the behavior, design for the behavior.

The rule of thumb:

**Prose for emotion. Bullets for proof.**

In this layout that means — the opening lines of each section earn the feeling, then bullets land the facts. You've already got that instinctively in how the sections are written. The narrative hooks pull them in, the bullets give them something to grab on the way out.

One watch-out: **Section 4 "How I Work" stays prose.** That's your human section — the one that makes you different from every other resume on the pile. Bullets would flatten it. Everything else — Section 3, Section 5 especially — bullets all day.

Go make your edits. Come back when you're ready and we'll do a pass together, tighten the bullets, and get it publish-ready.

[User]
fantastic.
Want this live tonight. its 6:24pm.
Quick walk, food and back here with my edits made

[Assistant]
Perfect. Go decompress. Food and fresh air is part of the process.

I'll be here when you get back. Have your edited draft ready and we'll get it across the finish line. 🤙

Summary:
**Conversation Overview**

Bert Mahoney, a senior AI product designer and builder based in New York (relocating to Denver, CO in June 2026), came to Claude with a significant career repositioning project. His core challenge: after approximately 2,000 job applications over three years yielding only five interviews, he needed both a structural resume overhaul and a strategic rebrand — shifting his professional identity from UX/design-focused to AI product design and builder, leading with his hands-on experience building private AI agent stacks using Agent Zero, LiteLLM, Ollama, and AWS EC2. He runs an independent practice called OpenClaw and is simultaneously launching an AI consulting offer targeting small businesses.

The session accomplished several concrete deliverables. Claude built and delivered a fully ATS-optimized `.docx` resume using standard section headers (Professional Summary, Skills, Work Experience, Education, Awards & Recognition), a keyword-rich flat skills table, and rewritten bullets weaving in Bert's target keywords. Claude also advised on ATS best practices including avoiding Google Docs Heading styles in favor of bold Normal text in ALL CAPS, and warned against routing the resume through Google Docs for PDF export due to table parsing risks. Subsequently, Claude wrote a website description for Bert's AI Product Designer & Builder role (hybrid tone, medium length), a meta/SEO one-liner for bertmahoney.com, four LinkedIn header title options, a full LinkedIn About section (keyword-rich, seeding the consulting offer), and a complete six-section homepage draft for bertmahoney.com structured as Hero, The Problem I Solve, What I Do, How I Work, Selected Work, and Footer. Bert confirmed bullets should replace prose lists in scannable sections while Section 4 (How I Work) stays as prose. The session ended with Bert stepping away to eat and walk before returning with edits to finalize the homepage for same-night publishing.

Key details about Bert's positioning and voice: 30 years of experience across 8 design disciplines and 30+ industries, dual Bachelor's degrees (Computer and Information Science plus Fine Arts) from Hartwick College, INFP with metacognitive and trauma intelligence fluency, and a strong "hybrid — credible but human" tone preference. He identifies his core differentiator as being both a designer who can build and a builder who can communicate with anyone. He also mentioned a side product concept called "Life Merit Badges" (physical framed badges marking major life milestones) with potential tie-ins to his Substack, Barely But Here — noted as a separate creative world from bertmahoney.com. Bert's preferred working style is iterative: he wants section structures approved before copy is written, and he flags when something is missing context before Claude begins.

Resume optimization for ATS systems


[User] yep.  about to hike and need a few prompts for articles on Barely But Here

[Assistant] Quick selections and I'll have prompts ready by the time your boots are tied. 🥾

[User]
Q: What's the vibe you're going for?
A: Let Claude surprise me

Q: Any themes on your mind right now? (Select all that apply)
A: Feeling exhausted at surviving, and now have to double down to get my life reinflated

[Assistant]
Love that framing — "reinflating a life" is already a line. Here are five walk-worthy prompts:

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**1. "The Cost of Not Dying"**
You did the hard work of surviving. Nobody tells you that surviving has a bill attached — and it comes due right when you thought you were done paying. What does it actually cost to come back?

---

**2. "Tired of Being Resilient"**
Resilience got rebranded as a superpower. But what if you're just exhausted from having to use it so many times? The gap between *still standing* and *actually living* is real, and most people won't admit it's there.

---

**3. "Refill"**
Not reinvention. Not a comeback. Just... refill. What do you put back in when the tank ran dry keeping you alive? And what do you discover you don't actually want back?

---

**4. "The Second Bill"**
First bill: survive. Second bill: rebuild. Nobody warned you the second one was bigger. And you're exhausted when it arrives.

---

**5. "Now What"**
Two words nobody talks about after the hard part ends. The silence after the storm isn't peace — it's the moment you realize the storm was at least something to push against. Now you have to build from stillness.

---

> **TL;DR:** Five prompts, all orbiting the same truth — surviving is just the beginning of a much harder, quieter work.

Go walk. Good stuff is in there. 🎙

[User]
heres the transcript.
lmk if theres a n article in there

[Assistant]
Oh, there's an article in there. There are *five.*

But the one that wants to be written first — the one with the most heat — is this:

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**"The Canyon"**

> *The gap between still standing and actually living isn't a crack in the sidewalk. It's the Grand Canyon. And nobody gives you a map.*

This is the piece. It has everything:

- **The real cost of surviving** — not metaphorical, literal. Homelessness, the car, CPTSD, treatment-resistant depression, suicidal ideation. The bill that arrives *after* you didn't die.
- **The second bill** — the incomprehensibly larger one. The rebuild. The scale-of-magnitude thing you nailed: dollar → million → billion → trillion. That's a line.
- **The mountain** — getting pushed down the ice slope after nearly summiting. That image is brutal and perfect.
- **The canyon itself** — no GPS, no cell signal, no satellite. A psychological terrain that has no map because almost nobody survives it long enough to draw one.
- **The "faith" gut-punch** — that ending is gold. Words that lost all meaning when you said them 500 times in the dark. And the quiet rage of "it's not just a divorce."

---

**Ready to draft it?**

Say the word and I'll build the full Substack package — intro, body, pull quotes, image prompt, the works. This one deserves the full treatment.

[User] draft it please, ready

[Assistant]
On it. Give me a few minutes — this one deserves to be done right.\n\nNow drafting the full piece.\n\nFull package — article, SEO metadata, pull quotes, image prompt, subscribe CTA, and first comment draft.

A few things worth flagging:

- **The "peewee soccer" line** — I kept it. It earns a breath before the next gut punch. But it's yours to cut.
- **Tax Day as the frame** — felt right. You pay what you owe and keep moving. Structural without being clever about it.
- **The ending** — *"I know which way is up. That's enough for today."* — that's the line the whole piece builds toward. Don't touch it.

Read it over. Tell me what's off. 🏔

[User]
I'm ready for another set of prompts to pickup where this left off. Or what else can we probe??

I do have my gigantic catalog of unorganized content but not ready to let you in just yet. need it more organized

[Assistant]
Totally fair — the vault stays locked till you're ready. Smart call.

Here's where I see the natural threads to pull from where *The Canyon* left off:

---

**Where the story wants to go next:**

- **The outer world not being ready** — you said it in the transcript. Inner world repaired, outer world lagging. That disconnect is its own piece.
- **What you left in the canyon** — the backpack. The repression. The tongue-biting. What you *didn't* bring back up with you.
- **The Colorado move** — you're two months out. That's not just logistics. That's a man walking toward something instead of away from something. First time in a while.
- **The invisibility problem** — skilled, experienced, 30 years, and the market acts like you don't exist. That rage is *Barely But Here* fuel.
- **The new person** — you've kept it atmospheric. Maybe it stays that way. But there's a piece in *what it feels like to let someone in when your trust got obliterated.*

---

**Or we go somewhere completely different:**\n\nPick a direction and we go. 🎙

[User]
Q: What direction feels right?
A: Surprise me again

[Assistant]
Alright. Here's what I'm seeing that nobody's writing about yet:

---

**1. "The Resumé of Scars"**
Your 30-year design career isn't a LinkedIn profile. It's a map of every industry that needed you, used you, and moved on. What if the thing the market can't see is the thing that makes you irreplaceable — and the problem isn't your value, it's that value like yours has no checkbox?

---

**2. "What the Car Taught Me"**
Not about homelessness. About *clarity.* When everything is stripped away — and I mean *everything* — what's left isn't nothing. It's signal. Pure, unfiltered signal. What did you learn about yourself when there was nothing left to hide behind?

---

**3. "I Stopped Performing Okayness"**
There's a version of you that spent years managing how you appeared to the world while quietly drowning. The performance of fine. The costume of functional. When did you stop wearing it — and what happened to the people who preferred the costume?

---

**4. "The Ones Who Didn't Make It"**
You did. Not everyone who was in that canyon did. You know that. What do you carry for them — and what do you do with survivor's guilt when survival itself was the hardest thing you ever did?

---

**5. "Analog Man in a Algorithmic World"**
Gen X. 30 years of craft. Deep human pattern recognition built before the internet. And now a market that wants to automate the exact thing you're best at. What does a human translator do when the machines are learning the language?

---

> **TL;DR:** Five directions, all with heat. Number 2 and 5 feel like they have the most unexplored territory. But you'll know which one's already talking.

Which one's already talking? 🎙

[User] What the car taught me was a huge release. transcript attached. Let me know what you think.

[Assistant]
Reading it now.\n\nOkay. Read. Here's my honest take:

---

**This is not one article. This is a book.**

The car transcript is rawer, wider, and more structurally complex than The Canyon. It needs more shaping. But inside it are **three distinct pieces** that each deserve their own space:

---

**Piece 1: "Signal"**
The pure clarity piece. No woulda-coulda-shoulda. No 48-hour planning horizon. No programmed "I'm fine" — just what you actually *see* when the noise of normal life gets stripped away. The snow globe. The free passage. The merit badge. This is the philosophical core.

**Piece 2: "3am"**
The cop with the nightstick. The parking lot. The dysregulation. The Starbucks until morning. This is the *visceral* piece — the one that puts the reader inside the car. Short. Punchy. Immersive. Barely needs context.

**Piece 3: "The Table"**
The people who fell off the table and can't find the ladder back up. The PhDs sleeping in cars. The dominoes. The entitlement contrast. The market that won't extend a hand. This one connects directly into your current situation — and straight into the *Skilled Invisibility* piece waiting to be written.

---

**The vault you mentioned?** The couple hundred transcripts from the car? That's not a content archive.

That's the book. *Barely But Here* the book. And you already have the material.

---

**What do you want to do with this?** Draft Piece 1 now, or talk about the bigger picture first?

[User] Let's draft #1. It would be good to build out some articles queued up. I've been slacking and the lead I built before I lost

[Assistant]
Let's get that queue rebuilt. Drafting now.\n\nFull package — article, SEO, pull quotes, image prompt, CTA, first comment, and series architecture.

A few things worth noting:

- **The snow globe** runs as the central metaphor from open to close. It earns it. Don't cut it.
- **The 3am scene** appears here as texture only — compressed, functional. The full version gets its own piece and will hit harder for the restraint shown here.
- **The archive tease at the end** is deliberate. It tells readers this is a body of work, not a one-off. Good for subscriber retention.
- **Series architecture** is mapped out in the editorial notes — three pieces, 2-3 weeks apart, each one building toward The Table which bridges directly into the Skilled Invisibility piece.

You've now got two pieces drafted and a three-part series structured. Queue is getting rebuilt.

Ready to go straight to Part 2 — *3am* — or take a breath first? 🎙

[User] lets get all 3 drafts done tonight. tomorrow i edit and hand them back

[Assistant]
Let's run the table. Part 2 — *3am* — going in now.\n\nGood. Part 2 done. Straight into Part 3 — *The Table.*\n\nAll three done. Here's what you've got queued:

---

**The Canyon** — Tax Day anchor. The second bill. The Grand Canyon of rebuilding. ✅

**Signal** — Part 1. The snow globe. Clarity from outside the glass. ✅

**3am** — Part 2. The baton on the window. The body keeping score. ✅

**The Table** — Part 3. The dominoes. The people on the floor. The hand nobody extends. ✅

---

A few things to watch for when you edit tomorrow:

- **The callback is intentional** — *"Not faith. Not hope. A hand."* in Part 3 rhymes with The Canyon's faith/hope section. If it lands for you, keep it. If it feels too neat, cut it.
- **"Dominoes. That's it."** needs white space around it in Part 3. Two words, their own line, nothing crowding them.
- **The archive tease** threads through all three car pieces. By Part 3 it's a promise to your readers. Don't soften it.
- **Publishing cadence:** The Canyon first, then 2–3 weeks between each car piece. Let them breathe.

Go edit. Bring them back when they're ready. 🎙

[User]
cchanging title to this:
What The Car Taught Me,
to
What being homeless living in my Car Taught Me,

[Assistant]
Smart change — more search-friendly and zero ambiguity about what the series is.\n\nUpdated across all three files — series title and slugs. Every instance, including the series architecture notes at the bottom of each package.

Go get some sleep. You've got four solid pieces queued for tomorrow. 🎙

[User]
Also, now that I have written far more content I'd like to update the Start Here page to reflect that.

Could you review my current Start Here page and help me update/edit it to current articles??

https://berchman.substack.com/p/start-here-for-barely-but-here

[Assistant]
On it.\n\nGot it. Read the whole thing. Here's my honest assessment before I draft the update:

---

**What's working — keep it:**
- The safety disclaimer and 988 reference. Non-negotiable, leave it exactly as is.
- The Jodi testimonial. Specific, warm, credible.
- The "This is not inspiration porn" line. That's a hook.
- The Randy Pausch closer. Earns its place.
- The publishing schedule section.

**What needs updating:**
- The **"Coming Soon"** section lists *Car Life Snapshots* as upcoming — you've now written a full 3-part series on it. That needs to move up into the main content map, not sit in the waiting room.
- The **"Where to Begin"** section links are all broken (`localhost` — Substack placeholder links). These need real URLs or placeholders you can fill in.
- **The Canyon** needs to be added as a standalone anchor piece.
- The **series architecture** has grown significantly — the page should reflect that depth.
- The intro copy is solid but slightly undersells where you are now. "Working on my wellness" reads a little tentative for someone who just wrote four pieces this good.

---

**One question before I draft:**

Do you have live URLs for the existing published pieces — Losing Agency 1–3, the Mental Hospital series, Functional Depression, etc.? If you can drop them here I'll wire them in. If not, I'll use placeholder brackets you can swap in during editing.

Ready to build the updated page the moment you confirm. 🎙

[User] you should find all the live links from my homepage: https://berchman.substack.com/

[Assistant]
On it.\n\nJavaScript-rendered — homepage won't show post links that way. Let me try the archive directly.\n\nSearch isn't surfacing individual post URLs. Let me try fetching specific post paths directly based on what I know from the Start Here page.\n\nGood — got the psychiatric hospital Day 1 URL. Let me grab the rest systematically.\n\nGold — your berchman.com homepage is surfacing recent post titles. Let me grab those URLs directly.\n\nGot everything I need. Full live URL list confirmed. Drafting the updated Start Here now.\n\nDone. Here's what I found and what I did with it:

**Live URLs confirmed from berchman.com and search:**
- All 9 recent posts wired in with real links
- Psychiatric Hospital Day 1 confirmed live
- The Canyon, Signal, 3am, The Table — placeholder links using your standard slug pattern, ready to swap in once published

**What changed from your original:**
- Intro copy tightened — drops the tentative "working on my wellness" framing for something more honest and forward
- "Coming Soon" section updated — Car Life is now a full named series, not a teaser bullet
- Four new series sections added with proper structure
- Full reverse-chronological archive added at the bottom
- Every `localhost` broken link replaced

**Check before you publish:**
- Psychiatric Hospital Days 2, 3, 5 — slugs need confirming, marked in editor notes
- *The Soup I Was In* — didn't surface in search, may be under a different title or not yet live. Check your archive and drop the link in if it's there.
- *The Between Space* — verify it's a separate post from *Choosing vs. Arriving*, I noted it in the editor section.

Good night's work. 🎙

[User]
I have a message I recieved transcribed. And I then have my reply.

Can you help me organize my reply so it makes sense. I jump around alot.
Let me know if you have any questions before starting

[Assistant] Read both sides carefully. Before I start organizing, a few quick questions:\n\nThese will help me shape it right rather than just clean up the structure. 🎙

[User]
Q: What's the goal of your reply — where do you want this to land?
A: All of the above, carefully balanced

Q: What's the tone you want to strike?
A: Vulnerable and open

Q: Is this being sent as a voice message, text, or written message?
A: Voice message

[Assistant]
Perfect. Organizing now for voice — which means it needs to flow naturally when spoken, not read like a document.

One more thing before I start: your reply in the transcript jumps between several distinct threads — the emotional response to her feedback, the technical explanations, the context of everything you're juggling, and what you actually want from this relationship going forward.

I'm going to organize those into a clean spoken arc:
**Acknowledge → Own what's fair → Explain without defending → Clarify the reality → Land on where you want to go.**

Give me a few minutes.\n\nAll your content is there — nothing invented, nothing cut that mattered. Just reordered so it lands.

A few things worth flagging before you record:

**What the structure does:** Opens with acknowledgment so she feels heard before you explain anything. Owns what's fair without collapsing into apology. Moves through the tech quickly — it's necessary but it can't dominate. Then gets to the real stuff: what this is to you, what you actually want, and where you want to go.

**The line to protect:** *"I'm in. If you still are."* — that's your close. Everything builds to it. Don't bury it in another sentence.

**One honest observation:** The friendship section is the heart of this message. The tech stuff is context. If you're short on time or energy when you record, you could cut the tech down to two sentences and spend more time in the emotional section — that's where she'll actually hear you. 🎙

Summary:
**Conversation Overview**

This was a highly productive working session focused on creating and organizing content for Bert's Substack publication, *Barely But Here* — a personal essay platform documenting lived experience through candid, unpolished writing. Bert was preparing to go hiking and needed article prompts quickly, then progressively expanded the scope throughout the evening to include full drafted articles, a complete three-part series, an updated Start Here page, and help organizing a personal voice message reply.

The session produced four fully drafted Substack packages: *The Canyon* (a standalone anchor piece about the gap between surviving and rebuilding), and a complete three-part series titled *What Being Homeless Living in My Car Taught Me* — comprising *Signal* (clarity and perception), *3am* (the physical and nervous system cost of chronic threat), and *The Table* (systemic observations about people who get knocked off stable ground and the absence of support structures). Each package included the full article, SEO metadata, pull quotes, an image prompt in a consistent desaturated gouache/watercolor style, a subscribe CTA, a first comment draft, and editorial notes. Bert confirmed the series title change from "What The Car Taught Me" to "What Being Homeless Living in My Car Taught Me" — a deliberate choice for clarity and searchability — and Claude updated all three files including slugs to reflect the change.

Claude also rebuilt Bert's Start Here page using live URLs sourced from berchman.com and search, organizing the growing catalog into navigable series sections, adding a full reverse-chronological archive, and updating the intro copy to reflect the publication's current depth and forward momentum rather than tentative framing. The session closed with Claude organizing a voice message reply Bert had drafted for a collaborator named Saskia — structuring his jumping, multi-threaded response into a clean spoken arc: acknowledge, own what's fair, explain context, address specific technical items briefly, name what the relationship means to him, and close with clear intention. Delivery notes were included to help Bert pace the recording. Bert's working style throughout was fast-moving and iterative — he prefers to generate drafts in full then edit himself, works well with series architecture and named article prompts, and appreciates honest editorial notes alongside the creative work. He mentioned a large catalog of unorganized recorded content he's not yet ready to open, and a vault of material he wants more organized before sharing with Claude.

Article prompts for Barely But Here


[User]
I'm trying to resolve my marriage settlement agreement and would like you to review this email reply for lack of emotion and correctness in a asset negotion for a marriage ending:

Hi Liz,

I understand your position regarding a fixed settlement structure.

However, I’m unwilling to enter into an agreement that requires waiving my share of post-separation market growth without knowing the current value of the underlying asset.

To be clear, I am referring only to the growth on the community portion as of the date of separation, not any contributions made after that date.

Without updated account information, there is no way to evaluate what is being exchanged or forfeited, and I’m not in a position to make a counterproposal based on incomplete data.

If updated values are provided, I am open to reviewing your proposal and working toward resolution.

If not, then the appropriate path is to proceed through the court process, where full financial disclosure will be required and the division determined accordingly.

At this point, I must decline the current proposal as presented.

Let me know how you would like to proceed.
--

Let me know if you have any questions before starting

[Assistant]
Here's my read on your email:

- **Tone:** Controlled, clear, professional. No emotional leakage — which is exactly right for this context.
- **Logic:** Airtight. You're not refusing to negotiate, you're refusing to negotiate blind. That's reasonable and defensible.
- **Leverage:** You correctly name the alternative (court) without threatening — it reads as matter-of-fact, not aggressive.
- **One potential gap:** The phrase "community portion as of the date of separation" is precise legal language — good — but only if *she* understands it the same way. If there's any ambiguity about what date or what counts as community property, you may want one clarifying line.
- **Closing:** "Let me know how you would like to proceed" is neutral and functional. Fine as-is.

**TL;DR:** This is a solid, clean email. It's firm without being hostile, logical without being cold, and it puts the ball squarely in her court. I wouldn't change much — but see the one suggested tweak below.

---

**Optional line to add** (after the "community portion" sentence, if there's any chance the separation date is disputed or unclear):

> *"For reference, I am using [DATE] as the date of separation, which I understand to be the agreed-upon date for purposes of this settlement."*

If that date is already locked and uncontested, skip it. No need to open a door that's already closed.

---

**One honest flag:** The email is emotionally correct for *negotiation*, but it reads like it was written by a lawyer, not a person. That's probably intentional and appropriate here — just making sure it's a choice, not a default. If there's any strategic value in a single human sentence (something like *"I'd genuinely prefer to resolve this without involving the courts"*), it could soften the read without weakening your position.

Your call. The email works as-is.

[User] I like this: I'd genuinely prefer to resolve this without involving the courts

[Assistant]
Good instinct. Here's where I'd place it:

---

> *If updated values are provided, I am open to reviewing your proposal and working toward resolution. I'd genuinely prefer to resolve this without involving the courts.*

---

It lands right after you signal openness — so it reads as sincere, not strategic. You're not leading with it (which would feel weak) and you're not burying it at the end after the court line (which would undercut it). It sits exactly where the human moment belongs.

That's the move.

[User]
here's my revision. thoughts?
--
I understand your position regarding a fixed settlement structure.
However, I’m unwilling to agree to an arrangement that requires me to waive my share of post-separation market growth.
To be clear, I am referring only to the growth on the community portion as of the date of separation, not any contributions made after that date by you or the school.
Proper evaluation of the value requires full disclosure of the total 401 (k). This information would allow me to determine the growth of my share since the date of separation.
I am open to providing a counteroffer to your proposal (cash + QRDO) and to working toward a resolution once I receive full disclosure of the 401(k).
This would allow us to avoid appearing before a judge in court, which I believe is still your preference.
Otherwise, the path forward is to proceed through the court process, where full financial disclosure is required, and the division will be determined accordingly.
At this point, I must decline the current proposal as presented.
Let me know how you would like to proceed.

[Assistant]
This is stronger. A few notes:

- **"without knowing the current value"** is gone — and the replacement is better. You're now explaining *why* you need the data, not just demanding it. That's a more sophisticated position.
- **Naming the school** is a meaningful addition. It clarifies the boundary precisely and removes ambiguity about post-separation contributions.
- **"cash + QRDO"** signals you've actually read her proposal and are engaging with its specific terms. Good.
- **"which I believe is still your preference"** — this is the sharpest line in the email. It's a gentle reminder that she has skin in this game too. Effective without being pointed.

---

**Two small things to consider:**

**1. "This would allow us to avoid appearing before a judge in court"**
"Appearing before a judge in court" is slightly redundant — court implies a judge. Consider:

> *"This would allow us to avoid going to court, which I believe is still your preference."*

Tighter. Same weight.

**2. The closing sequence feels slightly repetitive**
You decline the proposal, then ask how to proceed — but the paragraph before already lays out the two paths clearly. The final two lines are fine, just know they're functional, not adding new information.

---

**TL;DR:** This revision is meaningfully better than the first draft. More specific, more human, and strategically smarter. The "your preference" line alone earns its place. Minor cleanup on the court sentence and you're done.

[User]
now this, removed last line as its implied. just a simple reply, good to go or not:

I understand your position regarding a fixed settlement structure.
However, I’m unwilling to agree to an arrangement that requires me to waive my share of post-separation market growth.
To be clear, I am referring only to the growth on the community portion as of the date of separation, not any contributions made after that date by you or the school.
Proper evaluation of the value requires full disclosure of the total 401 (k). This information would allow me to determine the growth of my share since the date of separation.
I am open to providing a counteroffer to your proposal (cash + QRDO) and to working toward a resolution once I receive full disclosure of the 401(k).
This would allow us to avoid appearing in court, which I believe is still your preference.
Otherwise, the path forward is to proceed through the court process, where full financial disclosure is required, and the division will be determined accordingly.
At this point, I must decline the current proposal as presented.

[Assistant] Good to go.

Summary:
**Conversation Overview**

The person sought Claude's help reviewing and refining a formal email declining a marriage settlement proposal. The email was directed to someone named Liz and concerned a dispute over post-separation market growth on a retirement account (401(k)), with a proposed settlement involving cash and a QDRO. The person's core position was that they could not evaluate or counter any proposal without full financial disclosure of the account, and that they were only claiming growth on the community portion as of the separation date, excluding post-separation contributions from Liz or a third party (a school).

Claude assessed the original draft as emotionally controlled and logically sound, identifying one area for improvement: adding a humanizing line to signal genuine preference for out-of-court resolution. The person responded positively to the suggested line — "I'd genuinely prefer to resolve this without involving the courts" — and incorporated a version of it into subsequent drafts. Through two revision cycles, the email evolved to be more specific (naming the school, referencing the exact proposal terms), more strategically pointed (noting that avoiding court is "still your preference"), and tighter in language. Claude flagged minor redundancies, which the person addressed. The person also chose to remove the final "let me know how you would like to proceed" line in the last draft, judging it implied. The final version was approved by Claude as good to go.

The person demonstrated a preference for precise, unemotional language in negotiation contexts, with selective use of one human moment for strategic effect rather than emotional expression. They iterated quickly and made targeted edits rather than wholesale rewrites.

Marriage settlement negotiation review


[User]
hi claude. I have a cover letter I'd like you to review and edit.
I've included the job description as well.
Let me know what you think.
It needs my voice. feel too robotic
--

cover letter

Hi [Hiring Manager Name],
I’m a product designer and design leader with 10+ years of experience operating across the full startup lifecycle—from early concept through scaled systems—specializing in translating ambiguous problem spaces into clear, actionable product direction.
What drew me to Red Cell is the belief that product design is a core operating capability. That’s how I’ve worked throughout my career: partnering closely with founders, product, and engineering to shape products from the ground up while remaining deeply hands-on in UX/UI, prototyping, and system design.
In parallel, I’ve been designing and building AI-powered agent systems, applying my UX discovery process to identify workflow opportunities and translate them into human-centered AI products. This includes developing agent architectures, prototyping interaction models, and solving challenges around memory, personality consistency, and long-term user trust—areas I see as critical to the next generation of product design.
My experience spans building 0→1 concepts, defining north star product visions, and evolving those into scalable design systems and frameworks that support growth without unnecessary complexity. I’ve worked extensively in regulated and high-stakes environments, where clarity, speed, and thoughtful decision-making are critical.
I’m particularly interested in contributing to Red Cell’s portfolio model—helping multiple companies move from early ambiguity to durable, well-designed products through a combination of product intuition, systems thinking, and hands-on execution.
I’d welcome the opportunity to contribute as both a design leader and operator across your ecosystem.
Best,
Bert Mahoney
https://bertmahoney.com

[Assistant]
Here's my read on it, Bert:

**Quick assessment:**

- The bones are solid — good structure, right themes, smart angles on AI work
- It's written *about* you, not *from* you — that's the core issue
- Several phrases feel like LinkedIn filler: "translating ambiguous problem spaces," "thoughtful decision-making," "hands-on execution"
- The AI paragraph is your strongest differentiator — but it's buried in the middle
- The closing is flat. It doesn't land.

**TL;DR:** Strip the corporate coating, add some actual personality, and let the specificity do the heavy lifting. You're not a "seasoned design professional." You're Bert — 30 years, 8 disciplines, building AI agent systems in your basement on a MacBook. That's a better story.

---

Here's a revised version:\n\n**What changed and why:**

The opening now makes an actual claim instead of listing credentials like a resumé. "30 years, 8 disciplines" is more human than "10+ years" — and it's *your* actual number. Worth owning.

The AI paragraph got moved and sharpened. "Live builds" does more work than "demonstrated experience." It implies the receipts exist without you having to say "I have receipts."

The closing line — *"I'm the kind of designer who gets restless doing the same thing twice, but obsessive about getting the systems right so I don't have to"* — is a thesis sentence that sounds like a person. Keep it or swap it, but that's the energy the whole thing needed.

One flag: you used "10+ years" in the original but you have 30. I bumped that up — make sure it aligns with what's on your resumé before you send it.

[User] what do you mean by "It's a forcing function."

[Assistant]
Good catch — that line needs to earn its keep.

A **forcing function** is something that compels a decision or change. In product development, it means design isn't just reacting to what engineers build or what founders dream up — it's the thing that *forces* clarity. It surfaces the hard questions early: *What is this actually for? Who uses it? What happens when they don't understand it?*

The idea is that when design is treated as a core operating capability (which Red Cell explicitly says they believe), it doesn't wait to be handed a spec. It creates the conditions that make good product decisions *unavoidable*.

It's a sharp little phrase — but only if the reader already lives in that world. If the hiring manager doesn't, it reads like jargon cosplay.

**My honest take:** the contrast between "service function" and "forcing function" is clever, maybe too clever. It could land perfectly, or it could make someone squint.

A safer version that keeps the same energy:

> *"...product design done right isn't a service function. It shapes what gets built, not just how it looks."*

Less flashy. Clearer. Still has teeth.

Your call — you know your audience better than I do. If Red Cell is full of people who think in systems, "forcing function" works. If they're operators who want directness, cut it.

Summary:
**Conversation Overview**

Bert Mahoney, a product designer and design leader, asked Claude to review and edit a cover letter he had drafted for a position at Red Cell Partners. His primary concern was that the letter felt too robotic and didn't reflect his voice. Claude provided a full revised draft along with a detailed critique explaining what was changed and why.

Claude's feedback identified the core issue as the letter being written "about" Bert rather than "from" him, with several phrases flagged as corporate filler. Claude noted the AI work paragraph as his strongest differentiator but pointed out it was buried, and flagged the closing as flat. The revised draft led with a more personal, direct opening, moved and sharpened the AI paragraph, and replaced generic language with more specific, voice-driven phrasing. Claude also flagged a discrepancy between "10+ years" in the original and Bert's actual 30 years of experience, recommending he own the larger number.

Bert followed up asking Claude to clarify the meaning of "forcing function" as used in the revised opening. Claude explained the concept, then offered an honest assessment that the phrase might land differently depending on the audience — and provided a simpler alternative. Bert's website is bertmahoney.com. No corrections to Claude's approach were requested.

Cover letter review and editing for product design role


[User]
Need help making this blog post for my pro website bertmahoney.com a bit more human.

# Designing AI Systems That Actually Work
Over the past few months, I’ve been quietly building something new.
Not experimenting. Not prompting.
Building.
I’ve been designing and deploying custom AI agents—not generic tools, but systems tailored to how individuals and businesses actually work.
And in doing that, I kept running into the same pattern.
---
## Where Most AI Implementations Break Down
Most AI systems look impressive in a demo.
Very few hold up in real use.
They tend to fail in predictable ways:
- They lose context mid-conversation
- They behave inconsistently from one interaction to the next
- They don’t align with actual workflows
- They rely heavily on third-party tools with unclear data boundaries
The result is something that feels:
- unreliable
- disconnected
- and difficult to trust over time
That’s not a tooling problem.
It’s a systems design problem.
---
## A Different Approach: Designing for Real Work
Instead of starting with tools, I start with workflows.
Using a UX discovery mindset, I look at:
- how people actually do their work
- where time is lost
- where decisions slow down
- where context breaks
From there, I design AI systems that support those realities—not abstract use cases.
---
## What I’m Building
The systems I’m working on are designed around a few core principles:
### 1. Continuity Over Time
AI shouldn’t reset every session.
I’m building agents that:
- maintain context
- recall meaningful interactions
- and evolve based on use
---
### 2. Personality and Consistency
If an AI is used regularly, inconsistency becomes a problem fast.
So instead of treating personality as a prompt, I treat it as a system:
- structured behavior
- reinforced over time
- aligned with user expectations
---
### 3. Memory That Actually Matters
Most systems either remember nothing or everything.
Neither works.
The goal is structured memory:
- capturing key decisions
- storing relevant patterns
- enabling better future responses
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### 4. Security and Control
A lot of AI tools today require sending sensitive data into black boxes.
That doesn’t work for many businesses.
So I focus on:
- local-first or controlled environments
- clear data boundaries
- architectures that don’t rely entirely on SaaS platforms
---
### 5. Built for Real Workflows (Not Demos)
These systems aren’t designed to impress—they’re designed to be used.
That means:
- integrating into existing processes
- reducing friction
- and actually saving time
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## Why This Matters
The conversation around AI is still largely focused on capability.
What it can do.
But the real challenge is:
> how it behaves over time, in real environments, with real constraints
That’s where most systems fall apart—and where the real opportunity is.
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## What I’m Offering
Right now, I’m offering a $500 AI Systems Assessment for businesses.
This isn’t about selling tools.
It’s about helping you understand:
- Where AI can actually create value in your workflows
- What’s worth building—and what’s not
- How to approach it in a way that’s secure, scalable, and practical
---
## Final Thought
AI doesn’t need to be louder.
It needs to be more reliable.
More aligned with how people actually work.
And designed to hold up over time—not just in a demo.
---
If you’re exploring how AI could fit into your business—and want a grounded, practical approach—feel free to reach out.
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Let me know if you have any questions before starting.

[Assistant]
Not what I need here — this is a writing task, not a build. Let me dig into the post itself.

Here's what I'm seeing, Bert:

- **The bones are solid.** The structure is clear, the thinking is sharp, and the POV is real. No bullshit — that comes through.
- **It reads like a well-organized deck, not a voice.** Lots of bullet fragments, lots of short declarative lines that work as rhythm but add up to feeling a little... distant. Clinical, almost.
- **The "I" disappears too fast.** The opening is strong — *"I've been building"* — then it retreats into abstract principles and third-person problems. Where did you go?
- **The CTA is underselling.** "$500 AI Systems Assessment" just sitting there like a price tag on a shelf. Needs a little more warmth around it.
- **It needs one moment of texture** — a real detail, a specific frustration, something that makes a reader think *"yeah, that's exactly it."*

**TL;DR:** Great skeleton, thin skin. It needs your voice in a few more places, less listicle energy in the middle, and a closing that lands like a person — not a brochure.

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Here's a revised version:

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# Designing AI Systems That Actually Work

Over the past few months, I've been quietly building something new.

Not experimenting. Not prompting.

Building.

I've been designing and deploying custom AI agents — not generic tools, but systems built around how individuals and businesses actually work. Real workflows. Real constraints. Real people who don't have time for something that looks great in a demo and falls apart on Tuesday.

And in doing that, I kept running into the same pattern.

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## Where Most AI Implementations Break Down

Most AI systems look impressive the first time you see them.

Very few hold up when they actually have to work.

They tend to fail in the same predictable ways: losing context mid-conversation, behaving inconsistently from one session to the next, not connecting to how work actually happens. A lot of them require sending sensitive data into platforms where you're not entirely sure what happens to it.

The result is something that feels unreliable. Disconnected. Hard to trust over time.

That's not a tooling problem. That's a design problem.

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## A Different Approach

I start with workflows, not tools.

With a UX discovery mindset — something I've been honing across industries for 30 years — I look at how work actually happens: where time gets lost, where decisions slow down, where context breaks. From there, I design systems that support those realities, not abstract use cases that sound good in a pitch.

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## What I'm Building

The systems I'm working on are organized around a few core ideas:

**Continuity over time.** AI shouldn't reset every session. I'm building agents that maintain context, recall meaningful interactions, and get more useful the longer they're in use — not less.

**Consistent personality.** If an AI is part of someone's daily work, inconsistency becomes a real problem fast. I treat personality as a system: structured, reinforced over time, aligned with how the user actually thinks and works.

**Memory that earns its place.** Most systems either remember nothing or everything. Neither works. The goal is structured memory — capturing the decisions and patterns that actually matter, and leaving the rest out.

**Real data control.** A lot of AI tools today are black boxes. That doesn't work for businesses that handle sensitive information. I focus on local-first or controlled environments with clear data boundaries — architectures you can actually understand and trust.

**Built for real work, not demos.** These aren't systems designed to impress. They're designed to be used — integrated into existing processes, reducing friction, actually saving time.

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## Why This Matters

Most of the conversation around AI is still focused on capability. What it can do.

But the harder question — the one most vendors aren't answering — is how it behaves over time, in real environments, with real constraints.

That's where most systems fall apart. And that's where the real opportunity is.

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## What I'm Offering

Right now, I'm offering a **$500 AI Systems Assessment** for businesses that want a clear-eyed look at where AI can actually create value — and where it can't.

This isn't about selling you tools. It's about helping you think through what's worth building, how to approach it practically, and what a system that actually holds up looks like for your specific context.

If that sounds like something you need, reach out. I'm easy to talk to, and I don't waste your time.

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*AI doesn't need to be louder. It needs to be more reliable — designed to hold up in real work, not just in a room full of impressed people.*

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**Key changes made:**
- Converted most bullet fragments into flowing prose — keeps the rhythm without the listicle feel
- Reinjected your voice in the opening and the workflow section ("Real people who don't have time for...")
- Made the 5 principles feel like paragraphs with personality, not slide headers
- Softened the CTA landing — "I'm easy to talk to" does more work than you'd expect
- Moved the kicker line to italics at the end — gives it a bit of editorial weight without screaming

Want me to tighten anything further, or punch up a specific section?

Making your AI systems blog post more conversational